Title: Lux Beginnings (Obsidian & Onyx)
Author: Jennifer L. Armentrout
Rating: ♥︎♥︎♥︎ (For both books)
Current Mood: Feeling like you were acting weird and someone suddenly shows up and catches you, so you try to act like you weren't doing that weird thing you were doing. Perfectly illustrated by the most popular school skipper, Ferris Bueller.
I've heard nothing but wonderful things about Jennifer L. Armentrout and literally everything she has written, so picking up the Lux series seemed like an absolute no-brainer. So I bought Beginnings, Consequences, and Opposition just so I had all five novels ready for me when I had the time to pick them up. If I had not bought Consequences and Opposition, I'm not too sure that I would have continued with the series; maybe I would have because I don't really like leaving things unfinished. But struggling to find the time to sit and actually read Opal (the third book in the series) has been difficult, which has put off my entire TBR list, which kind of irritates me.
Brief rundown of Obsidian: The novel is about a girl named Katy, who moved with her mother to a small town, after the death of her father. So Katy moves in next door to the Black family, that consists of Dee and Daemon Black, twin brother and sister who are so ridiculously good looking they can't be from this planet. And the kicker? They aren't. Daemon, being non-human, does not want to associate with humans, and is the jerkiest jerk to Katy, but his twin sister Dee likes Katy and wants to be BFFs. Cool, so Katy and Dee become fast friends, and then weird stuff happens, and it's revealed that Katy's BFF is a Luxen, an alien race. Weird twist of events, as if it's not already practically written in the first sentence: Katy ends up having feelings for this hot alien boy, the same one who acts like he can't stand her and is really rude to her, but she can't help her feelings, and he can't help his and mush.
Katy and Daemon's relationship. I feel like it's so generic -- I seen it coming just by reading the back of the book. And at first it didn't really bother me, but then it kind of did. At this point I'm reading the series just to find out what happens, and it has nothing to do with Katy and Daemon's relationship. It happened so quick and so spontaneously, and Katy is actively trying not to want Daemon, but golly-gee, she just honestly can't resist him because he's irresistible. Not to mention that he's a huge narcissistic egomaniac. The guy is totally obsessed with himself. And it's quite hilarious, in a very sad way.
The one thing that bothered me even more than the Katy/Daemon relationship? The spelling errors in this book. The spelling errors, the spelling errors. I understand if there's one, a slip up in the editing process, but really? This is a book that is published, and is sold on nearly every online retailer and in-store, and there are multiple spelling errors? It was the thing that bothered me the most. The most. I can't even put into words how much those spelling errors infuriated me. Isn't there someone called an editor, who has a job at a publishing company, and their job is specifically made for someone to read a book and edit it before it's shipped off to the printing press? Come on guys.
There were literal moments, when reading this book, that made me cringe and made me feel ridiculously embarrassed for the characters. Honestly. There were times where I had to close the book and look around to make sure that nobody was alerted to the embarrassment that was radiating from certain pages within this book. Do you know how sad it is, that I had to close the book a couple of times and collect myself because I was embarrassed for these characters? And I was alone. To be embarrassed and alone? I don't know if that's good writing, just cringe-worthy situations, or Jennifer L. Armentrout trying to channel her inner teenager. If she is trying to channel her inner teenager, that inner teenager is awkward as shit, and needs to be homeschooled and should never be allowed to leave the house.
The story and the idea is absolutely great, don't get me wrong. It's just the generic romance, the way it all played out, the having to hang out with each other, and trying not to want each other, and all that bullshit that makes it.. well.. bullshit. Once I finish with the series, they will be put nicely and neatly on my shelf, and they most likely won't be picked up again. The covers are gorgeous, though. Super shiny, and I like shiny things.




